1. Women are constantly being told what they can do to better themselves. I had no idea there was so much stuff wrong with women’s bodies

2. I think it might be a bit short. I'd like ot read more of what you think

3. Not yet

4. I think you have a clear line of thought for your blog and once you get a chance to expand upon it, it will meet the requirements. For now, it just need mores sources and explanation.

5. Punctuation and grammar could use some work, but overall it matches the tone of what a blog post should be.